Bewerbung Englisch - so okay?

Ja meinetwegen,das Fundament von Laudatio war doch schon mal sehr gut.

Wenns dann steht,gibts immer Kritiker,ist auch gut so.

nein ich hab gar nix kritisiert :eek: ich habmir nur den original text genommen und das ausgebessert was ich anders gemacht hätte. fertig :D

sollte eher hilfe sein und keine kritik, ich find den text eh super so wie er ist!
 
Und jetzt noch mein Senf dazu: ;)

10 January 2007 entweder 10th of January 2007 oder 10. January 2007



Ms Margaret Speirs
Office of the University Secretary
Senate House
Tyndall Avenue
Bristol
BS8 1TH



Dear Mrs. Speirs,

Re: Application for the available position as a secretary

I noticed with interest your advertisement in yesterdays edition of the Frankfurter Allgemeine and I wish to apply for the position as a secretary.

At the end of July, I will conclude my education as an office administration clerk. I wish to start my professional career as soon as possible after my education, whereforI shall be available for work as 1st August 2007.

I am very familiar with the computer processing applications Word, Excel, Access and PowerPoint. I thoroughly enjoy challenge of managing all secretarial and organisational tasks independently.

Furthermore I am competent in typing and I enjoy the written and verbal communication very much, as well as the contact I encounter with other people, through using my foreign language skills.

Because of my education as an office administration clerk, I was able to gain an inside viewinto the daily business of an office.

I´m looking forward to hear from you. oder I´m looking forward to your answer.

Yours sincerely,



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