Englisch Presentation

Smile_Terrier

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Englisch Präsentation

Hallo
ich hab eine bitte an die jenigen von euch, die gut Englisch können!
Morgen sollen wir eine kurze Präsentation über Werbung halten, haben eine Zettel darüber bekommen und das halt in eine Präsentation umwandeln sollen. Jetzt hab ich das gemacht und wollte fragen, ob vl wer von euch schaun kann ob fehler drin sind? Bitte Danke!!

Good morning ladies and gentlemen!

Welcome to my presentation about advertising.
Id like to talk about the various adverts and there advantages and disadvantages.

There are adverts on TV spots, on the Internet, on the radio, on the print media, outdoor advertising and direct mailing.

At first, I would like to talk about TV spots. There are very persuasive because there are moving pictures which show products in action, but TV ads are very expensive. TV spots are not only on the TV at home, there are also in the cinema before the film starts.

Many companies use the internet to promote their products. On free providers they make a homepage about there company and which products there offer.

On the radio you cant see any pictures of the products, so they use in there adverts catchy jingles and slogans. Radio ads are cheaper than TV spots.

In many newspapers and magazines you can find Full-page ads. They can be so expensive like TV spots. Smaller ads are cheaper.

In cities, you can find Billboards. On public transport you can also find ads. There are very effective because many people can see the ads.

Companies, which have the names and addresses of prospective customers, can send them information about products, but not only by post, they use also mailshots.

Now I will tell you some advantages about the ads.
Ads can give you information.
They makes newspapers and magazines cheaper.
Advertising means more jobs.
Makes freesheets and free Internet access possible.

At last I will tell you some disadvantages about the various ads:
People buy things they do not need.
Radio and TV spots interrupting the radio and TV programmes.
Many people dont like junk mail.
Ads are not always honestly and can be misleading.

Thank you for listening.

lg
Melanie
 
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Ich hab das jetzt nich 100%ig grammatikalisch korrigiert und redegewandt gemacht, sonst wär das wohl zu auffällig. Aber die argen Schnitzer sind weg. ;)

Good morning ladies and gentlemen!

Welcome to my presentation about advertising.
Id like to talk about the various adverts and their advantages and disadvantages.

There are adverts on TV spots, on the Internet, on the radio, on the print media, outdoor advertising and direct mailing.

At first, I would like to talk about TV spots. They are very convincing because there are moving pictures which show the products in action, but TV ads are very expensive. TV spots are not only on the TV at home, they are also in the cinema before the film starts.

Many companies use the internet to promote their products. On free providers they make a homepage about their company and which products there offer.

On the radio you cant see any pictures of the products, so they use adverts catchy jingles and slogans for it. Radio ads are cheaper than TV spots.

In many newspapers and magazines you can find Full-page ads. They can be as expensive like TV spots. Smaller ads are cheaper.

In cities, you can find Billboards. On public transport you can also find ads. They are very effective because many people can see the ads.

Companies, which have the names and addresses of prospective customers, can send them information about products, but not only by post, they can also use mailshots.

Now I'm going to tell you about some advantages from ads.
Ads can give you information.
They make newspapers and magazines cheaper.
Advertising means more jobs.
Make freesheets and free Internet access possible.

At last I will tell you some disadvantages about the various ads:
People buy things they do not need.
Radio and TV spots are interrupting the radio and TV programmes.
Many people dont like junk mail.
Ads are not always honestly and can be misleading.

Thank you for listening.

lg
Melanie
 
hmmm die version von kurenai find ich gut
nur: heißt es nicht advantages OF - nicht from?
und am schluss gehört glaub ich honest statt honestly
 
Smile_Terrier schrieb:
Hallo
ich hab eine bitte an die jenigen von euch, die gut Englisch können!
Morgen sollen wir eine kurze Presentation über Werbung halten, haben eine Zettel darüber bekommen und das halt in eine Presentation umwandeln sollen. Jetzt hab ich das gemacht und wollte fragen, ob vl wer von euch schaun kann ob fehler drin sind? Bitte Danke!!

Good morning ladies and gentlemen!

Welcome to my presentation about advertising (da würde ich eventuell eher advertisement sagen).
I’d like to talk about the various adverts and there (wenn du "ihre" meinst, heißt es their)advantages and disadvantages.

There are adverts on TV spots, on the Internet, on the radio, on the print media, outdoor advertising and direct mailing.

At first, I would like to talk about TV spots. There are very persuasive because there are moving pictures which show products in action, but TV ads are very expensive. TV spots are not only on the TV at home, there (they statt there) are also in the (the weglassen) cinema before the film starts. (noch besser: they are also shown in cinema before the film starts).

Many companies use the internet to promote their products. On free providers they make a homepage about there company and which products there (they, nicht there) offer.

On the radio you can’t see any pictures of the products, so they use in there adverts catchy jingles and slogans(hier würde ich schreiben: On radio you can´t see any picutres,so they use catchy jingles and slogans for advertising their products). Radio ads are cheaper than TV spots.

In many newspapers and magazines you can find Full-page ads. They can be so expensive like TV spots. Smaller ads are cheaper.

In cities, you can find Billboards. On public transport you can also find ads. There (They are...nicht there)are very effective because many people can see the ads (hier würde ich den Satz ausbauen, z.B: They are very effective, because many people can see the ads on their way home).

Companies, which have the names and addresses of prospective customers, can send them information about products, but not only by post, they use also mailshots.

Now I will tell you some advantages about the ads.
Ads can give you information.
They makes(kein s! nur make) newspapers and magazines cheaper.
Advertising means more jobs.(ich würde hier eher sagen: More jobs because of advertisement)
Makes freesheets and free Internet access possible.

At last I will tell you some disadvantages about the various ads:
People buy things they do not need.
Radio and TV spots interrupting the radio and TV programmes.
Many people don’t like junk mail.
Ads are not always honestlyhonest and can be misleading.

Thank you for listening.

lg
Melanie

Ich hoffe, halbwegs geholfen zu haben - berichte uns dann, wie es war ;)
 
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Danke dass ihr euch kurz zeit genommen habt! :)

kann die Sätze nicht so gut in Englisch formulieren.. möchte im Halbjahr aber trotzdem einen 1er *gg* steh nämlich zwischen 1 und 2.. :rolleyes:
lg
Melanie
 
@calpurnia: wenn ich das ganze so umgeschrieben hätte wie es gehört, einwandfrei, redegewandt usw wäre das sicher zu auffällig ;) Deswegen hab ich nur die ärgsten Schnitzer rausgenommen.
 
@ Chrisi
naja.. so unter der Stunde zeig ich halt hin und wieder auf und sonst lern ich hauptsächlich für die Schularbeit und Test und da kann ich dann meistens alles. Aber so aus dem Stehgreif.. :D
 
Sei froh, dass du Vorbereitungszeit hast ;)

Das hatte ich nicht immer... da hieß es auf einmal "So, jetzt hält jeder ein Kurzreferat".... :eek:
 
Also des könnt ich glaub ich nicht einfach so.. hab für das jetzt auch eine Weile gebraucht.. Aber unser Professor ist eh recht leiwand! ;)
 
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